A real personal statement that received an Oxford Economics and Management offer, broken down phrase by phrase so you can see exactly what each sentence is doing and why it works.
Every highlighted line is tagged and explained: where the hook comes from, where an original argument is being made, where two sources are put in conversation with each other, which lines are pure super-curricular evidence, and which lines tie straight back to the course. Click any highlight to read the reasoning behind it.
This is not a generic checklist or a list of dos and don'ts. It is one full statement taken apart in front of you, so you can see what strong critical thinking actually looks like on the page.
What you get:
The full annotated statement as an interactive file that opens in any browser, desktop or mobile
21 annotations across five categories: hook, original argument, synthesis, super-curricular evidence, course link
A category system you can reuse when reviewing your own drafts
Best for Economics, Economics and Management, and related applicants preparing statements for competitive UK universities.
Want your own personal statement reviewed this way? Drop me an email at [elliottaaaa@gmail.com].
A real personal statement that received an Oxford Economics and Management offer, broken down phrase by phrase so you can see exactly what each sentence is doing and why it works.
Every highlighted line is tagged and explained: where the hook comes from, where an original argument is being made, where two sources are put in conversation with each other, which lines are pure super-curricular evidence, and which lines tie straight back to the course. Click any highlight to read the reasoning behind it.
This is not a generic checklist or a list of dos and don'ts. It is one full statement taken apart in front of you, so you can see what strong critical thinking actually looks like on the page.
What you get:
The full annotated statement as an interactive file that opens in any browser, desktop or mobile
21 annotations across five categories: hook, original argument, synthesis, super-curricular evidence, course link
A category system you can reuse when reviewing your own drafts
Best for Economics, Economics and Management, and related applicants preparing statements for competitive UK universities.
Want your own personal statement reviewed this way? Drop me an email at [elliottaaaa@gmail.com].